Tuesday, 27 September 2011

Peer Assessment

Daryl Hay  marked my blog and gave me a 14/20 mark which is a grade b. however there are several things i need to do in order to improve my blog and make it better.

There were 3 main areas where i could improve on. communication Skills,research and my presentation. For communication i could improve on using more technical vocabulary within the detail i write. The presentation i have improved on greatly. At first i would just stick pictures anywhere however now, most pictures are layed out and put in the correct place in order for me to analyse and explain it. For research i could improve by going into more detail in writing. A good example would be fort editing. if there was not much editing within the video i would only write a line or two. Whereas i could focus on one thing and elaborate on that.

















In conclusion i will take all of the constructive criticism on board and try to use all of what was said to help me improve my blog.

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