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- Some very good efforts to present your work well. The analyses of music videos that are complete to a good standard show creativity in using visual material e.g. the screen grabs next to the points you want to make.
- Some evidence that you are going away and improving your posts, keep this up.
- Most posts attempted.
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- You must have posts 19 and 20 on your blog. The mark scheme looks for audience research.
- Post 17- explain whether each record label would be suitable for your artist, at the moment it is just dry facts.
- You must improve some of your posts, especially the early analyses of music videos- posts 2,3,4,5.
- To develop further with visual material, try including short clips of videos, just the part that illustrates your point. This will really go for the high marks for presentation.
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