WWW
- Range of videos considered, with some useful analysis in places.
- An attempt to include visual material through the use of embedded video.
EBI
- Your analysis needs a lot more work. Currently you are not really analysing, just describing. Use headers, Mise en scene, cinematography, sound and editing to help you focus your analysis.
- Make sure you include more visual material, use screen grabs to illustrate certain points.
- Think more carefully about the conventions - what are the ingredients? What must you have in a music video? E.g. lipsynching.
- For some reason your blog will not display all the posts on one page, please could you fix this (talk to a technician if you need to)
Effort - PR
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